Wow, it's been a while since posting. I'm in the middle of revising my second draft, but it's not going as quickly as I would like. Time is such a hard thing to come by. I also know that there are some major things I need to change, so a little of that is fear and procrastination. I think overall it's a pretty decent first draft, but I am beginning to wonder if my MC experiences enough true danger. I definitely think he changes by the end of the book, which is a must, but I need to up the odds on the risk quotient.
I really want to make some progress in the coming weeks.