tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post4313749584579450427..comments2023-05-05T07:16:17.899-05:00Comments on Ronald L Smith: 2nd Campaigner ChallengeRonald L. Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03649046677631873728noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-17602530402631343492011-10-08T08:22:23.669-05:002011-10-08T08:22:23.669-05:00Loved it!Loved it!Christy Farmerhttp://christyfarmer.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-18711131966604237722011-10-07T21:15:08.409-05:002011-10-07T21:15:08.409-05:00Your word working is excellent, appearing to be do...Your word working is excellent, appearing to be done with the greatest of ease, a good read.<br /><br />Good word usage and fun. Excellent.<br /><br />#188the wild magnoliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14355836751549469688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-88468614165617788992011-10-07T18:08:07.403-05:002011-10-07T18:08:07.403-05:00I like "vague miasma of doubt"--splendid...I like "vague miasma of doubt"--splendid way to use this word. Nice approach to the challenge.<br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-43529785386601115902011-10-07T05:21:09.061-05:002011-10-07T05:21:09.061-05:00Interesting story! Well done! Beautiful use of the...Interesting story! Well done! Beautiful use of the challenge words.Elizabeth Varadan, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01708206753256682635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-57662000785466775072011-10-05T08:32:27.708-05:002011-10-05T08:32:27.708-05:00Wonderful! So glad I stopped by here. Beautiful ...Wonderful! So glad I stopped by here. Beautiful writing.Susan R. Millshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09578747592345750650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-72552920831036172192011-10-04T15:29:04.799-05:002011-10-04T15:29:04.799-05:00Love the last line!
And now I want to know what h...Love the last line!<br /><br />And now I want to know what happens next!<br /><br />Great job!F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-21197607642572445912011-10-03T21:52:21.678-05:002011-10-03T21:52:21.678-05:00You have me wanting the backstory on this characte...You have me wanting the backstory on this character. Well done.<br />(#109)Julie Farrarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08810771028650707072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-22819712931206068652011-10-03T20:47:14.256-05:002011-10-03T20:47:14.256-05:00Wow! Well done.
I saw the challenge and didn't...Wow! Well done.<br />I saw the challenge and didn't even want to try to attempt it!Kelly Polarkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10968381456100611120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-45448717621050149442011-10-03T17:55:08.355-05:002011-10-03T17:55:08.355-05:00That was excellent!
Loved how your character made...That was excellent!<br /><br />Loved how your character made a reference to psychologists.<br /><br />Great job, Ron! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-6235709394239950972011-10-03T14:06:47.728-05:002011-10-03T14:06:47.728-05:00Great job weaving the words into the story - it...Great job weaving the words into the story - it's seamless. With those words, a true feat! Love the story.ruth.the.writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09854940988819225116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-86785114806362928182011-10-03T10:14:33.936-05:002011-10-03T10:14:33.936-05:00I think that "oscitate" is the hardest w...I think that "oscitate" is the hardest word in this odd yet interesting collection , yet you fitted it in so that the piece flowed smooth and natural ! Great job !<br />My entry at no.#185MISHhttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/campaign-challenge-no-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-49740850034558359312011-10-03T09:17:53.479-05:002011-10-03T09:17:53.479-05:00LOVE the idea of archaic words being able to reach...LOVE the idea of archaic words being able to reach inside us in a different way. Very moving.<br /><br />Awesome work! I so admire you 200-worders.Leigh Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15827971896088856057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-77636936900292625182011-10-03T06:17:30.297-05:002011-10-03T06:17:30.297-05:00Thanks everyone. I appreciate your comments and th...Thanks everyone. I appreciate your comments and the follows. I will return the favor!Ronald L. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03649046677631873728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-60647196296654291242011-10-03T04:54:13.125-05:002011-10-03T04:54:13.125-05:00Hi Ron: I really enjoyed your take on the words. ...Hi Ron: I really enjoyed your take on the words. Good story. "There is something missing in the internal clockwork of my being--a lacuna--a gap that can't be filled by joy or sensual pursuits." I loved this line, and I like your voice. You have my vote.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10474427967799515034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-20333558958662687672011-10-03T01:39:50.902-05:002011-10-03T01:39:50.902-05:00Awesome Ron! I love how you used Oscitate.
Best,
...Awesome Ron! I love how you used Oscitate.<br /><br />Best,<br />Suma.Suma Subramaniamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07450646116499708661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-68496588519970021242011-10-02T12:23:48.145-05:002011-10-02T12:23:48.145-05:00Great job! I loved that you went with the butterf...Great job! I loved that you went with the butterfly theme.<br />I'm entry #183.kjmckendryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07534751311630921447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-38491365437471756302011-10-02T07:39:20.104-05:002011-10-02T07:39:20.104-05:00Ron - This is terrific! Especially love the last ...Ron - This is terrific! Especially love the last line.Maeve Frazierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-69360100824260354222011-10-02T04:28:03.626-05:002011-10-02T04:28:03.626-05:00I am a Monarch, released from its chrysalis to soa...I am a Monarch, released from its chrysalis to soar, loosed from this mortal coil.<br /><br />Love that last line.<br />------<br /><br />Join me at the <a href="http://amloki.blogspot.com/p/sign-up-for-rule-of-three-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">Rule of Three Writers' Blogfest!</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-37203745225480311032011-10-01T23:39:14.104-05:002011-10-01T23:39:14.104-05:00This is a beautiful piece of writing. You've d...This is a beautiful piece of writing. You've done a great job getting those challenge words in seamlessly as well. <br />Mine is #3.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-78310279303059699522011-10-01T13:33:10.156-05:002011-10-01T13:33:10.156-05:00Very nice entry. I've been fascinated by the w...Very nice entry. I've been fascinated by the work created with this challenge.Stacy S. Jensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09646270238659432058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-4764140094929148602011-10-01T11:39:54.367-05:002011-10-01T11:39:54.367-05:00Well done. Great use of the challenge words and it...Well done. Great use of the challenge words and it reads as if it's a piece of a longer work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-44112279001623670332011-10-01T06:34:59.991-05:002011-10-01T06:34:59.991-05:00Thanks all. I really appreciate it.Thanks all. I really appreciate it.Ronald L. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03649046677631873728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-24460009623076426562011-10-01T03:23:21.808-05:002011-10-01T03:23:21.808-05:00This is a great piece of writing - I can however i...This is a great piece of writing - I can however imagine it being continued in a larger work! Or this being just the introduction to a really awesome work. Good job!Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-49074801059358475462011-09-30T18:13:31.860-05:002011-09-30T18:13:31.860-05:00Great flash. It paints a compelling picture. I c...Great flash. It paints a compelling picture. I can see the narrator standing at the edge of a roof, ready to leap off.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09247707812061900770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4120156474819730267.post-25834604402191917702011-09-30T17:45:24.102-05:002011-09-30T17:45:24.102-05:00Great job. Good use of the words. Enjoyed it very ...Great job. Good use of the words. Enjoyed it very much.Miranda Hardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17880449368013410349noreply@blogger.com